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Hina

2014-03-27T06:42:25Z

GrandTemulence: /* Relationship */

==Description==

===Physical===
*I like the idea of pulling from Latino roots for her, actually, go all out with the Dia de los Muetros influence, I think it could be fun. I feel like she might have a 'sexy'/'skimmy' feel to kinda capture the bubbly/festival feel, but it's not NECESSARY, it's just not explicitly obtrusive to the character.

*Spitballin' here: But I really do like the idea of the 'skimmy' feel with her wearing only a large sweater and showing a decent amount of leg? Mmm. Leg. I was imagining she's got cork-screw horns on her hands and a small ring of horns/spikes around her neck. Her sweater is probably Andean designed, and if I was going to give her colors probably: Chestnut skin, dark grey spines, purple blue sweater, etc.

===Mental===
*Sounds like you're making her bubbly, which is fine, because we need someone to keep the group light, especially Koray, so that works.

*Super bubbly, optimistic, yet still more mature than the other three of the core four. I feel like she's a schemer and plotter, trying to advance her and Koray's relationship/their position in life. She hides a cunning and cold side under that bubbly demeanor, she IS a necromancer after all. I feel like she feels that she has to be super bubbly for Koray so is more serious when she's separated from him.

===Musical===
*Again, I wouldn't be opposed to going all out in Latino roots. You said she felt kinda classical last night (before this bubbly thing came up), but I can see her being a fusion of the two which would be hella weird but possibly interesting. WE CAN MAKE IT WORK(?)

==Playstyle==

===Health/Shield Spread===
*Probably 50/50, to keep her simple. I can see her possibly burning down health to replenish shields, but that's not NECESSARY.

===General Feel===
*The '''black''' of the red and the black. Redesigned(?) to be '''passionate''' and '''necrotic''', I imagine Hina actually takes some cues from green and positive energy, where '''she bolsters an enemy's mental''' blocks and reserves, '''to feed off''' the heightened value. Which I guess when written out that way sounds very '''vampiric''', so nevermind I guess it's still black. Meanwhile, her '''physical''' attacks are '''focused on draining both herself and her opponent'''. Again pulling more explicitly from Magic, her special blocks (or the effect of one of her spells?) have an ''''Undying'''' tag, where they're able to be used for their purposes twice. This is actually REALLY nasty with some of the proposed spells we discussed, so I am in favor of it right now unless it proves to be too broken. Additionally, this allows for some interesting mechanics mirroring the skeletal walls in Clash of Heroes, though not necessarily.

===Passive===
Wanna try to explicitly establish a positive and a negative for each.
*'''Negative:'''
*'''Positive:'''

===Block===

===Spells===
Trying to come up with one purely physical, one purely mental, and one mix for every character, just to make sure each has one.
*'''Physical:'''
*'''Mental:'''
*'''Combination:'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationship==

===''[[Bahamut]]''===
*''I'll let you detail most of these, but thought I'd mention now instead of pulling the plan out of her ass Dai could get the idea from Hina. There's got to be differing circumstances between Hina's and Bahamut's deaths to make this work, but we can do that.

===''[[Koray]]''===
*See Koray's page! Probably sees them a little bit more in the future than Koray while Koray is like 'I'm going to wake up tomorrow and still be with her.' while Hina is 'In a hundred years I'm still going to be at his side.' I also feel that he was basically like a huge beacon on Planet X to her being a cubus so he's probably the favored of the cubus in general but only Hina can eat on him because relationships.

===''[Dai]''===
*I feel like she and Dai get along swimmingly and their differences only make them CLOSER. For lesbians? Wait no. While Dai is kinda off in the clouds, she's super grounded (except if it comes to Koray) and may lead to interesting conversations that I may want to just RP out to see where they would stand!

===''[[Zero Hunter]]''===
*Weirdly accepting of his goal (everything has to end sometime!) but comes to fight with him when he's threatening her companions because she can't learn to let go of all things. She's not a SUPER good necromancer.

===Issues to Be Resolved===
*It's possible she needs her own backstory, and then we need to work on the some of the finesse of her spell. Can she end it and she considers it in later arcs? Or is she stuck and kicking her own ass the entire time? Otherwise, I think she's pretty well put together. If you know what I mean.

*I'd say she's probably stuck in a hilarious feed-back loop of emotions in her tie? She wasn't ready to die YET so threw herself to Koray because she couldn't say goodbye yet. So she's tied to him by virtue of her own emotions and his emotions. So if she can let go AND he can let go, she can move on. Which means that could be a later scene in arc 2/3 with really sad goodbyes. Can't be worse than FFX!

*As far as backstory goes, I feel like Cubus (cubii?) aren't too common, so sort of gravitate to giant things of emotion like Koray and the gang. But Hina beat them all off with her charm and her magic power???

Koray

2014-03-26T19:07:42Z

GrandTemulence: /* Description */

==Description==

===Physical===
*Almost Arabic? Almond colored skin, dark hair, maybe some lighter scars on his face and his arms. How's his build? I imagine him slightly muscular without being action hero, like clearly in-shape due to the demands of his lifestyle.

===Mental===
*He's a teenager. Hotheaded and impulsive. Heartstrong and headweak.

===Musical===
*I was kinda like 'It kinda sucks that Indian kind of music wouldn't work for him' but you throw hip-hop drums underneath and bam. YOU'RE WELCOME

* https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJXn45HycUY

*This is pretty good and the channel has some good stuff to pull from!

==Playstyle==

===Health/Shield Spread===
*60/40, at most 70/30. Definitely not focused on regenerating shields (or 'going on the defensive), but still not TOO out of whack.

===General Feel===
*'''Red.''' So red. Your suggestions are very good on this front, '''all offense, no defense.''' Red decks doesn't really impress in 2014, but the interesting ones (in my opinion) are '''increasing damage''' to opponent or to all players. It's possible as an effect he's able to double the effects of attack or damage blocks until his next turn, stuff like that, '''all or nothing start to finish.''' All aspects of Red mentioned in the wiki ('''destroying opponent's desired stuff, sacrificing one's own stuff for great temporary power, easy access to direct damage''') is very Koray. '''Haste''' being predominantly (entirely?) a Red thing is also an interesting aspect, it's possible he has access to spells or passives that grant him an extra move when matching attack or damage. Additionally, with this effect, I could see it being a toggle spell, where the default is he gets extra moves while matching, while the toggle is instead he gains extra damage (with the (possible?) gate of the toggle requiring not flipping until the next turn). It's a simple and thematic toggle, so we may have finally found one, huzzah.

===Passive===
Wanna try to explicitly establish a positive and a negative for each.
*'''Negative:'''
*'''Positive:'''

===Block===

===Spells===
Trying to come up with one purely physical, one purely mental, and one mix for every character, just to make sure each has one.
*'''Physical:'''
*'''Mental:'''
*'''Combination:'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationship==

===[[Dai]]===
*In my mind, admiration, eventually being interpreted as something more. But good luck with that, kid.

===[[Hina]]===
*Legitimately loves (as much as a dumb 17 year old can) her and tries for the best. Since she hasn't said anything before, her wanting to go off world and change their lifestyle comes as a surprise but he goes with it (and then is separated from her with a blob/Elf) and then feels weird that she's dead.

===[[Karm]]===
*I imagine he thinks Karm is super cool looking and has a 'devil may care' attitude when he just can't. Misunderstandings!

===[[Savash]]===
*This is a can of super worms.

===[[Zero Hunter]]===
*Hey man fuck you back off my friends I'll cut you wait you're cutting me touche

==Issues to Be Resolved==
*I thinks Koray's big issue currently is when the Servant (or whatever) enters him (hehe), and why. Something I recently started considering is Savaeiou(y)h sealed it in him when he was young, because he was drunk on whores and didn't think it through. Because I think that adds more to Savaesh's story if you want to use him, but I don't know. I think a lot of things.

*I think that kinda works. Maybe Savash is super gifted at magic/psychic/SOMETHING and saw his son wasn't getting that power so shoved an imprisoned/dying servant into his son to give him an advantage like he had, but he didn't think it through so he can't really control it since it's not natural! This may also have lead to Savash's current state of being a shitty father because he feels PRETTY BAD he shoved that into him.

Koray

2014-03-26T19:04:40Z

GrandTemulence: /* Issues to Be Resolved */

==Description==

===Physical===
*Almost Arabic? Almond colored skin, dark hair, maybe some lighter scars on his face and his arms. How's his build? I imagine him slightly muscular without being action hero, like clearly in-shape due to the demands of his lifestyle.

===Mental===
*He's a teenager. Hotheaded and impulsive. Heartstrong and headweak.

===Musical===
*I was kinda like 'It kinda sucks that Indian kind of music wouldn't work for him' but you throw hip-hop drums underneath and bam. YOU'RE WELCOME

==Playstyle==

===Health/Shield Spread===
*60/40, at most 70/30. Definitely not focused on regenerating shields (or 'going on the defensive), but still not TOO out of whack.

===General Feel===
*'''Red.''' So red. Your suggestions are very good on this front, '''all offense, no defense.''' Red decks doesn't really impress in 2014, but the interesting ones (in my opinion) are '''increasing damage''' to opponent or to all players. It's possible as an effect he's able to double the effects of attack or damage blocks until his next turn, stuff like that, '''all or nothing start to finish.''' All aspects of Red mentioned in the wiki ('''destroying opponent's desired stuff, sacrificing one's own stuff for great temporary power, easy access to direct damage''') is very Koray. '''Haste''' being predominantly (entirely?) a Red thing is also an interesting aspect, it's possible he has access to spells or passives that grant him an extra move when matching attack or damage. Additionally, with this effect, I could see it being a toggle spell, where the default is he gets extra moves while matching, while the toggle is instead he gains extra damage (with the (possible?) gate of the toggle requiring not flipping until the next turn). It's a simple and thematic toggle, so we may have finally found one, huzzah.

===Passive===
Wanna try to explicitly establish a positive and a negative for each.
*'''Negative:'''
*'''Positive:'''

===Block===

===Spells===
Trying to come up with one purely physical, one purely mental, and one mix for every character, just to make sure each has one.
*'''Physical:'''
*'''Mental:'''
*'''Combination:'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationship==

===[[Dai]]===
*In my mind, admiration, eventually being interpreted as something more. But good luck with that, kid.

===[[Hina]]===
*Legitimately loves (as much as a dumb 17 year old can) her and tries for the best. Since she hasn't said anything before, her wanting to go off world and change their lifestyle comes as a surprise but he goes with it (and then is separated from her with a blob/Elf) and then feels weird that she's dead.

===[[Karm]]===
*I imagine he thinks Karm is super cool looking and has a 'devil may care' attitude when he just can't. Misunderstandings!

===[[Savash]]===
*This is a can of super worms.

===[[Zero Hunter]]===
*Hey man fuck you back off my friends I'll cut you wait you're cutting me touche

==Issues to Be Resolved==
*I thinks Koray's big issue currently is when the Servant (or whatever) enters him (hehe), and why. Something I recently started considering is Savaeiou(y)h sealed it in him when he was young, because he was drunk on whores and didn't think it through. Because I think that adds more to Savaesh's story if you want to use him, but I don't know. I think a lot of things.

*I think that kinda works. Maybe Savash is super gifted at magic/psychic/SOMETHING and saw his son wasn't getting that power so shoved an imprisoned/dying servant into his son to give him an advantage like he had, but he didn't think it through so he can't really control it since it's not natural! This may also have lead to Savash's current state of being a shitty father because he feels PRETTY BAD he shoved that into him.

Koray

2014-03-26T18:59:52Z

GrandTemulence: /* Relationship */

==Description==

===Physical===
*Almost Arabic? Almond colored skin, dark hair, maybe some lighter scars on his face and his arms. How's his build? I imagine him slightly muscular without being action hero, like clearly in-shape due to the demands of his lifestyle.

===Mental===
*He's a teenager. Hotheaded and impulsive. Heartstrong and headweak.

===Musical===
*I was kinda like 'It kinda sucks that Indian kind of music wouldn't work for him' but you throw hip-hop drums underneath and bam. YOU'RE WELCOME

==Playstyle==

===Health/Shield Spread===
*60/40, at most 70/30. Definitely not focused on regenerating shields (or 'going on the defensive), but still not TOO out of whack.

===General Feel===
*'''Red.''' So red. Your suggestions are very good on this front, '''all offense, no defense.''' Red decks doesn't really impress in 2014, but the interesting ones (in my opinion) are '''increasing damage''' to opponent or to all players. It's possible as an effect he's able to double the effects of attack or damage blocks until his next turn, stuff like that, '''all or nothing start to finish.''' All aspects of Red mentioned in the wiki ('''destroying opponent's desired stuff, sacrificing one's own stuff for great temporary power, easy access to direct damage''') is very Koray. '''Haste''' being predominantly (entirely?) a Red thing is also an interesting aspect, it's possible he has access to spells or passives that grant him an extra move when matching attack or damage. Additionally, with this effect, I could see it being a toggle spell, where the default is he gets extra moves while matching, while the toggle is instead he gains extra damage (with the (possible?) gate of the toggle requiring not flipping until the next turn). It's a simple and thematic toggle, so we may have finally found one, huzzah.

===Passive===
Wanna try to explicitly establish a positive and a negative for each.
*'''Negative:'''
*'''Positive:'''

===Block===

===Spells===
Trying to come up with one purely physical, one purely mental, and one mix for every character, just to make sure each has one.
*'''Physical:'''
*'''Mental:'''
*'''Combination:'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationship==

===[[Dai]]===
*In my mind, admiration, eventually being interpreted as something more. But good luck with that, kid.

===[[Hina]]===
*Legitimately loves (as much as a dumb 17 year old can) her and tries for the best. Since she hasn't said anything before, her wanting to go off world and change their lifestyle comes as a surprise but he goes with it (and then is separated from her with a blob/Elf) and then feels weird that she's dead.

===[[Karm]]===
*I imagine he thinks Karm is super cool looking and has a 'devil may care' attitude when he just can't. Misunderstandings!

===[[Savash]]===
*This is a can of super worms.

===[[Zero Hunter]]===
*Hey man fuck you back off my friends I'll cut you wait you're cutting me touche

==Issues to Be Resolved==
*I thinks Koray's big issue currently is when the Servant (or whatever) enters him (hehe), and why. Something I recently started considering is Savaeiou(y)h sealed it in him when he was young, because he was drunk on whores and didn't think it through. Because I think that adds more to Savaesh's story if you want to use him, but I don't know. I think a lot of things.

Hina

2014-03-26T18:43:31Z

GrandTemulence: /* Mental */

==Description==

===Physical===
*I like the idea of pulling from Latino roots for her, actually, go all out with the Dia de los Muetros influence, I think it could be fun. I feel like she might have a 'sexy'/'skimmy' feel to kinda capture the bubbly/festival feel, but it's not NECESSARY, it's just not explicitly obtrusive to the character.

*Spitballin' here: But I really do like the idea of the 'skimmy' feel with her wearing only a large sweater and showing a decent amount of leg? Mmm. Leg. I was imagining she's got cork-screw horns on her hands and a small ring of horns/spikes around her neck. Her sweater is probably Andean designed, and if I was going to give her colors probably: Chestnut skin, dark grey spines, purple blue sweater, etc.

===Mental===
*Sounds like you're making her bubbly, which is fine, because we need someone to keep the group light, especially Koray, so that works.

*Super bubbly, optimistic, yet still more mature than the other three of the core four. I feel like she's a schemer and plotter, trying to advance her and Koray's relationship/their position in life. She hides a cunning and cold side under that bubbly demeanor, she IS a necromancer after all. I feel like she feels that she has to be super bubbly for Koray so is more serious when she's separated from him.

===Musical===
*Again, I wouldn't be opposed to going all out in Latino roots. You said she felt kinda classical last night (before this bubbly thing came up), but I can see her being a fusion of the two which would be hella weird but possibly interesting. WE CAN MAKE IT WORK(?)

==Playstyle==

===Health/Shield Spread===
*Probably 50/50, to keep her simple. I can see her possibly burning down health to replenish shields, but that's not NECESSARY.

===General Feel===
*The '''black''' of the red and the black. Redesigned(?) to be '''passionate''' and '''necrotic''', I imagine Hina actually takes some cues from green and positive energy, where '''she bolsters an enemy's mental''' blocks and reserves, '''to feed off''' the heightened value. Which I guess when written out that way sounds very '''vampiric''', so nevermind I guess it's still black. Meanwhile, her '''physical''' attacks are '''focused on draining both herself and her opponent'''. Again pulling more explicitly from Magic, her special blocks (or the effect of one of her spells?) have an ''''Undying'''' tag, where they're able to be used for their purposes twice. This is actually REALLY nasty with some of the proposed spells we discussed, so I am in favor of it right now unless it proves to be too broken. Additionally, this allows for some interesting mechanics mirroring the skeletal walls in Clash of Heroes, though not necessarily.

===Passive===
Wanna try to explicitly establish a positive and a negative for each.
*'''Negative:'''
*'''Positive:'''

===Block===

===Spells===
Trying to come up with one purely physical, one purely mental, and one mix for every character, just to make sure each has one.
*'''Physical:'''
*'''Mental:'''
*'''Combination:'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationship==

===''[[Bahamut]]''===
*''I'll let you detail most of these, but thought I'd mention now instead of pulling the plan out of her ass Dai could get the idea from Hina. There's got to be differing circumstances between Hina's and Bahamut's deaths to make this work, but we can do that.

===''[[Koray]]''===
*''I'll let you detail most of this.''

===Issues to Be Resolved===
*It's possible she needs her own backstory, and then we need to work on the some of the finesse of her spell. Can she end it and she considers it in later arcs? Or is she stuck and kicking her own ass the entire time? Otherwise, I think she's pretty well put together. If you know what I mean.

Arc 1

2014-03-26T18:31:40Z

GrandTemulence: /* Scene 2 */

==Act 1==
'''General Goals:''' Introduce the four main characters, cover some past (optional), set up the Zirconian conflict and at the end introduce the MoS siblings.

===Scene 1===
*This probably more or less follows the spatball you tossed earlier. [[Koray]] is being melodramatic (possibly to [[Hina]]) about how things can never change, and [[Karm]] comes flying out of the sky splatting down.
*Koray, excited by something new, goes and help. Alternately, Hina does, because she seems more compassionate and active than Koray, at least in Arc 1.
*The duo badger him with questions about what the fuck, but offer him a home and he's like 'Sweet don't even have worry about things.'
**Before/shortly after this there may be the tutorial battle against [[The Triad]].
*The three goof around in relatively minor ways, Karm with his casual stealing may not help things.
**Koray may get his power here, or when Dai gets here, or have it since the start (honestly leaning towards that because it makes the most sense of 'fuck it nothing worse can happen in ruins' mentality).
*About a week passes, possibly more, before [[Dai]] is able to pinpoint where Karm went when he fucked up the portal.
*Second verse, same as the first, before they probably end up on [[Zirconia]] through an old portal from one of [[Planet X]]'s various ruins. (I think we moved the flea here, right, because overall it makes more sense?)

===Scene 2===
*The group is possibly split, Karm and Hina separate from Koray and Dai.
**I'm hesitant to do this so soon, especially because we want to make Koray either likeable before he hits on Dai and/or have him be just clearly awful at it and just trying to imitate his gang leader/dad/whatever. Like if he's actually trying, even if he fails, I don't know, he just feels kinda scummy to me then. Maybe I just like Hina too much now and feel like it's way too irrelevant of a betrayal.
**''We could maybe cut out the betrayal/hitting on until later when Hina's dead? I'm actually sort of attached to relationship now (maybe because I put too much of my current one into it!) and could maybe replace it with a scene later where the gang leader/father/triad makes fun of Koray for keeping with Hina with Dai and it's revealed he's attracted to her, but there's a difference between attraction and romance? Like you said it may be too scummy for a heroic character to do. He's flawed, but tries as hard as possible to be noble?
*''Something something they find the flea something something.''
**I IMAGINE the group meets back up before this if they're ever split up (OR: this is the catalyst for how they get split, when it collapses the roof in the ruins/cave/whatever the two end up on opposite sides of a mountain range or something? I don't know, we gonna pin down this area A LOT).
*''Something something aspects of Bahamut something something.''
**This may not be explored in depth until Act 2, actually.
*''Something something ZH and Devix pop up something something.''
**This may not happen until Act 2, actually.
*Wow, it's like we never work on the middle of our stories.

===Scene 3===
*Sensing the Voidspawn, [[Tad]] jumps planet to planet until it makes it to Planet X, trying to find the Voidspawn.
*[[Laidena]] is there beforehand (possible short flashback having Savaeiou(y)sh hit on her, but I kinda want it to be revealed she was there first rather than established onscreen), having expended all of HAZE's resources to get there, examining the weirdass cocoons.
*Tad is insistent on destroying them, Laidena on examining them.
*One, [[Corvus]], pops open and sends Tad to the Void, Laidena runs at it and seals off its ability to do that.
*It intends to strike back, but another, [[Umbra Obscura]], pops open and defends her, curious to learn about this reality rather than just rip it asunder.
*At their stalemate, they rip open the last cocoon, [[Shadow]], to be a tiebreaker, but it's pretty much blank and indecisive, unsure of what to make of anything.
*Frustrated at this, Corvus and UO break off (the latter with Laidena) and plan to experience life as they want to, leaving Shadow to do whatever he does.

==Act 2==
'''General Goals:''' Play up the feel of Zirconia, set up ZH as massing an attack.

*''Hm. Not really sure where to start this one. Things that probably happen:''
**ZH re-establishes contacts with the Agents. He's down to a militia at his disposal after his army and flying factory were taken out last time, and [[Weapon Goddess]] absolutely refuses to help him, in general because of his goal and specifically calling him a damn fool for trying to take out the same Zeroes that he was when he got sent to the Void.
**Shadow searches for purpose on Planet X. He builds a city in the wastelands, where the dark fae follow him. My current headcanon is they have some people they've tried to save from the wastelands' effects, and Shadow makes Jean from some of those spare parts, but I don't know, we can talk.
**UO and Laidena talk, not sure how often this will take the spotlight but it probably won't be for long, it'll just show that both are information-driven and unwilling (for various reasons) to get involved in the rising conflict.
**I actually kinda want to avoid Corvus too much, maybe one scene where you play him (in what will be revealed to be) searching for Bahamut.
**Speakin' of which, I imagine ZH is probably first to notice the planet's weird feel (well Dai is probably the first, but he's the first to act on trying to understand WHY it feels weird), possibly diggin' down and hitting the geomancy seal, which is far beyond his comprehension. He starts working on it back in the Shadow Plane and the planet starts to get the attention of Weapon Goddess and [[Tiamat]] a bit then, but they'll give ZH his space until he fails.
**The Aspects of Bahamut probably mostly piss away the main group's time with various trivialities.

==Act 3==
'''General Goals:''' Corvus strikes as ZH starts to attack, everything's fucked, Bahamut dies. Corvus retreats before he can blow up the planet, but oddly from the ashes it feels like Zirconia's future can improve. Then Arc 2 happens.

*''Likewise above, I'll just detail various here:''
**ZH gives up on his attempts of understanding the seal and just sets out to wipe Karm and Dai.
**Around the same time, Corvus finds Bahamut and begins his full scale attack.
**This wipes out Bahamut, a number of dragons, probably even more elves (including Xack, [[Andreas]]' twin brother), Hina, and ZH's remaining automaton.
**In the process (of trying to destroy the planet), he hits the seal and feigns battle damage to try and inspect it (to undo it, to destroy the planet).
**UO is not fooled, and is irked by not understanding the action, watching her sibling intently.
**Zirconia is down but not out, and it looks like there might be room for peaceful coexistence between dragons and elves now. Or one group could try to finish off the other. We'll see what they pick in [[Arc 2]] (spoiler it's mostly the latter)

==Issues to Be Resolved==
*I don't think we've ever pinned down how ZH and Devix escape the Void in this continuity, this is probably priority number one because how come Tad doesn't escape with them?
**It could be The Things In The Void have ZH and Devix contained in a location, while is so goddamn broken he's able to avoid them. [[Gatekeeper]], sensing the portal to Zirconia activating on Planet X, explores and brings ZH back out of obligation. Gives us some use of Gatekeeper at the beginning and he'd probably have negative interest in rescuing Tad, so.
**Alternately, they're used as fuel in the cocoons somehow. The dichotomy of destruction and enlightment works as well (and Devix had a 'make a black hole' spell as well, though the implication that was a one-time deal built into his armor/et cetera so he could go down swinging if his sword was destroyed). Kinda fiddly and doesn't have as much build-up, but a bit more straight-forward and not needing motivation.
*Detailing and/or nailing down bits in the middle, obvs. Totes obvs.
*Figuring out where Lugh (and a few other characters) fit into this. That could be Corvus' major thing in Scene 2.
*I assume part of the reason you want to split them isn't just so Koray can hit on Dai, but to re-enact some of the interpersonal strife Karm and Dai had during the Jack debacle. But I feel like if we legitimately want to turn the party against one another, that's best saved for the third Arc (which is where the Jack thing takes place anyway), when players are actually invested in the characters and have to choose sides emotionally rather than distantly go 'OH WHAT A HILARIOUS MIX-UP ''THIS'LL'' BE' right at like the beginning of the story
===Possible Locations===
*Probably figure out hubs and major ruins to kinda pace the gameplay/puzzles a bit. Hubs are nice and free to explore, ruins have challenges of some kind with a clear progression.
**'''Hubs:''' Amalgo, some elf village, ???
**'''Ruins:''' the one the flea's in, Corvus' attack in Act 3 could be really cool embodied as an event you move through
===Major Battles===
*'''Tutorial''' - Karm or Koray vs. The Triad
*'''Dragon''' - Dai (only?) vs. Dragon
*'''The Voidspawn''' - Puzzle to escape.
*'''Fake Climax''' (hehe) - Karm or Dai vs. ZH
*'''Corvus' Attack''' - Puzzle to avoid.

TONS MORE, but just off the top of my head.

Hina

2014-03-26T18:15:03Z

GrandTemulence: /* Physical */

The Triad

2014-03-26T17:54:59Z

GrandTemulence:

==Description==

===Physical===
*'''Zei:''' CATGIRL ANDROID CATGIRL ANDROID CATGIRL ANDROID
*'''Gnome:''' This sells that Koray is an odd duck and adds a silent character to communicate with ...'s and only a few people actually can understand it. Zei, Yeti, Savash(???), and Hina being the ones in the first arc, Jean and Shadow after! All gnomes look the same?
*'''Yeti:''' We gotta keep it weird I don't know. He's big, he's strong, he's fat, but he's super lovable and is the coolest one.

===Mental===
*'''Zei:''' I feel like Zei is probably all like 'I don't know who made me, but they made me the best there is' (death phrase too, I've got a killer thread set up when you're around ha ha). Like the recurring thing, there's a feeling of a lack of purpose, but she's content to bully what she can. There may be consequences in time, though!
*'''Gnome:''' The brains of the group and the leader (behind the scenes) and is very slow and methodical about what it does, but is usually out louded by Zei.
*'''Yeti:''' He's the 'face' to the rest of the world and is not as vicious as the others. He'll advise against senseless violence, but goes along with the others because they're louder than he is.

===Musical===
*Probably goofy music. Cats on Mars from the Cowboy Bebop soundtrack immediately comes up with these guys, which probably isn't a good thing for them.

==Playstyle==

===Health/Shield Spread===
*Mm, I'd say 50/50, just because I've been ignoring that and they're supposed to be average.

===General Feel===
*I feel like they're mooks. So they're able to secure an early victory against those that take time to build up, but anyone that's midgame will wreck them. In addition, their spells probably have three different effects, minor but as with what I just said they can completely crush characters reliant on momentum if played competently.

===Passive===
Wanna try to explicitly establish a positive and a negative for each.
*'''Negative:'''
*'''Positive:'''

===Block===

===Spells===
Trying to come up with one purely physical, one purely mental, and one mix for every character, just to make sure each has one.
*'''Physical:'''
*'''Mental:'''
*'''Combination:'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationships==

===[[Jean]]===
*If they're followers of Shadow, I feel like Jean probably treats them as 'subjects' to her princesshood. They really more or less ignore it, but she's Shadow's number two so they show at least token respect elsewhere. I imagine Jean does generally care for them and will be devastated when we eventually kill 'em off.

===[[Shadow]]===
*I like him being their leader, he comes to Planet X early and starts makin' a big show, it makes sense to me. They may have relationships with the other MoS siblings as well, though I suspect part of the reason they end up hitched to Shadow is if nothing else he's the least demanding boss of them.

==Issues to Be Resolved==
*Figurin' out the other two identities to be as strong as Zei is. At least one of them.

Lugh

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==Description==
*A beautiful woman, angel wings, white where Corvus is black. Wings as hands, maybe?

==Game Play==

===General Feel===
*Close to maybe Devix? Maybe she can put down field effects that restrict her and her opponent? I'm not completely sure on this yet.

===Passive===
*'''Positive'''
*'''Negative'''

===Block===

===Spells===
*'''Physical'''
*'''Mental'''
*'''Combination'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationships==
*[[Corvus]]-Made her, some loyalty, but is generally seen as a misguided man she hopes to turn around.
*[[Shadow]]-Fellow 'C-Lister' Void-Spawn and has some similarities while Lugh can understand the frustration and the like her fellow void-spawn is going through.
*[[Umbra Obscura]]-Most in common, but Lugh has empathy and morals, so is slightly scared of UO and maybe idolizes her.
*[[Dai]]-May connect with her rather than Karm in this case?

Corvus

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==Description==

===Physical===
*A terrifyingly burly and big Giant/Tengu. Stands like 8 feet tall. Dresses really well though.

===Mental===
*Burn it all and do it in a stylish manner.

===Musical===
*Thrash metal, plain and simple. Because he thrashes things!

==Playstyle==

===General Feel===
*Black/Red beat down tactics. He's coming at you hard and fast and heavy. Defense is secondary, but is more required than a character like say, Koray? He also requires strategy to use well or he quickly gets overwhelmed.

===Passive===

===Block===
*Match two special blocks, get a free attack?

===Spells===
*'''Physical'''
*'''Mental'''
*'''Combination'''

===Feelings about Propositions===

==Relationships==
*[[Koray]]-Along with Tad, Corvus' first experience to the rest of the world. Finds him a 'fun rival' to fight with sometimes, hopefully this won't prove his hubris undoing.

*[[Shadow]]-Pedantic creature, searching for meaning in a universe where there isn't any.

*[[Umbra Obscura]]-Obnoxious know it all, pursuing too vague and mysterious goals. Later, HATE HATE BREAK BONES BEEP BOOP

*[[Tad]]-Sent to the void, probably feels about the same as he does about Koray. Luckily, he's never coming back???

*[[Lugh]]-His own 'dear mirror' he's made to not really care about. Finds her useful, if completely unstable at times in cleaning out what he can't be bothered to.

Planet X

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==Overview==
Planet X is the Australia of planets. There’s only a few habitable cities, Amalgo (where Koray and Hina and the Triad and Koray’s dad (Savash?) are all from) being chief among them.

It’s the flotsam and jetsam of the planes, drifters and outcasts just congregate here, cast off from all but one another. Not that they really like each other, just that they don’t have any choice. Remember the Adventure Time episode with the city of thieves? I feel like it’s almost exactly like that, except probably a little more violent.

Technology levels of planet X run wildly from person to person and place to place. While maybe Zei is the most technologically advanced thing in Amalgo there’s maybe some crazy cat-people inventors living alongside crazy elven mages.

Size-wise, I’d wager that Amalgo is as sprawling as New York proper, but maybe not quite as densely populated, (just under a million, if that) so there will be times of no one in sight or sound distance leaving you in a lonely city!

The reason there is so few living people here is also that of the planes/planets this is Australia. The flora and the fauna are all hazardous to living things on a scale that Sote would be like ‘oh sheeeeit’. So hazardous that most people who end up here die horribly. Void influence is everywhere, the ‘wastes’ are filled with slavering monsters and dark cultures. The cities started as ruins that the inhabitants started to build up walls and band together to not be eaten by a corrupted zebra that only has the black stripes, the rest of it merely invisible.

Dark Fae live in the wastes and tame the monsters as beasts of burden. No one really ventures that far out, so those who have seen it are considered crazy. Shadow may build his ‘dark city’ out in the wastes out of a city like Amalgo that has since fallen to the area around it or its inhabitants all lost their minds and killed each other. Possibly even the city of Corvus’ first ‘test run’ with his existence, finding everything else remarkably fragile. He may have gotten a good fight out of one of the living people and that’s where Shadow finds him, finding a lot in common with this planet/plane because it’s castoffs and exiles and even from itself (meaning Big C and UO) Shadow is an outcast??

(Literally copy pasted just to have, will clean up later)

==Races==
Literally anything that has been listed on another page could be found here in varying numbers. Humans I assume may be one of the dominant races, alongside Cubus.

==Things to be Resolved?==
None that I can think of off the top of my head.

==Trivia==
Planet X may have started as a joke or a placeholder, but now it's a planet of the X-iles.

Setting

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==Three Plane(t)s==
Three major plane(t)s are the main focus of the story and one of them may not even come up that much [[Sote]] and one is dying/will die in the course of the story [[Planet X]] so there's also that. Our main focus are the wacky things that happen in [[Zirconia]] and the conflicts from there.

==Important Setting Concepts==
Mana?-The lifeblood of the universe, I've seen it as basically how the gods forged all of the planes and life, so of course it's important.

The Shadow Plane-Elemental, connected to the shadows of all things, may be the Ebon Dragon. The Agents hang out here sometimes.

The Void-Horrifying, used to be teeming with life, now all that's left is the worst of the worst.

Otherwise, the setting is a mish/mash of two madmen's canons so good luck with that.

Planet X

2014-03-10T07:49:38Z

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==Overview==
Planet X is the Australia of planets. There’s only a few habitable cities, Amalgo (where Koray and Hina and the Triad and Koray’s dad (Savash?) are all from) being chief among them.

It’s the flotsam and jetsam of the planes, drifters and outcasts just congregate here, cast off from all but one another. Not that they really like each other, just that they don’t have any choice. Remember the Adventure Time episode with the city of thieves? I feel like it’s almost exactly like that, except probably a little more violent.

Technology levels of planet X run wildly from person to person and place to place. While maybe Zei is the most technologically advanced thing in Amalgo there’s maybe some crazy cat-people inventors living alongside crazy elven mages.

Size-wise, I’d wager that Amalgo is as sprawling as New York proper, but maybe not quite as densely populated, (just under a million, if that) so there will be times of no one in sight or sound distance leaving you in a lonely city!

The reason there is so few living people here is also that of the planes/planets this is Australia. The flora and the fauna are all hazardous to living things on a scale that Sote would be like ‘oh sheeeeit’. So hazardous that most people who end up here die horribly. Void influence is everywhere, the ‘wastes’ are filled with slavering monsters and dark cultures. The cities started as ruins that the inhabitants started to build up walls and band together to not be eaten by a corrupted zebra that only has the black stripes, the rest of it merely invisible.

Dark Fae live in the wastes and tame the monsters as beasts of burden. No one really ventures that far out, so those who have seen it are considered crazy. Shadow may build his ‘dark city’ out in the wastes out of a city like Amalgo that has since fallen to the area around it or its inhabitants all lost their minds and killed each other. Possibly even the city of Corvus’ first ‘test run’ with his existence, finding everything else remarkably fragile. He may have gotten a good fight out of one of the living people and that’s where Shadow finds him, finding a lot in common with this planet/plane because it’s castoffs and exiles and even from itself (meaning Big C and UO) Shadow is an outcast??

(Literally copy pasted just to have, will clean up later)

==Things to be Resolved?==
None that I can think of off the top of my head.

==Trivia==
Planet X may have started as a joke or a placeholder, but now it's a planet of the X-iles.

Main Page

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*[[Setting]]
**[[Sote]], '[[Planet X]]', [[Zirconia]]
*[[Story]]
*[[Characters]]
**'''Main Characters:''' [[Dai]], [[Hina]], [[Karm]], [[Koray]]
**'''Voidspawn:''' [[Corvus]], [[Lugh]], [[Shadow]], [[Umbra Obscura]]
**'''Agents:''' [[Fenrir]], [[Tiamat]], [[Weapon Goddess]], [[Zero Hunter]]
**'''Miscellaneous''' [[Cim]], [[Devix]], [[Laidena]]
*[[Gameplay Concepts]]
*[[Pseudo-Code]]
*[[Races]]
** [[Elves]], [[Dwarves]], [[Dragons]], [[Orcs]], [[Servant]], [[Uligo]], [[Cubus]], [[Usagi]]
==Priorities==

Main Page

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*[[Setting]]
**[[Sote]], '[[Planet X]]', [[Zirconia]]
*[[Story]]
*[[Characters]]
**'''Main Characters:''' [[Dai]], [[Hina]], [[Karm]], [[Koray]]
**'''Voidspawn:''' [[Corvus]], [[Lugh]], [[Shadow]], [[Umbra Obscura]]
**'''Agents:''' [[Fenrir]], [[Tiamat]], [[Weapon Goddess]], [[Zero Hunter]]
**'''Miscellaneous''' [[Cim]], [[Devix]], [[Laidena]]
*[[Gameplay Concepts]]
*[[Pseudo-Code]]
*[[Races]]
** [[Elves]] [[Dwarves]] [[Dragons]] [[Orcs]] [[Servant]] [[Uligo]] [[Cubus]] [[Usagi]]
==Priorities==

Zirconia

2014-03-10T07:43:23Z

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==Overview==

Where the magic happens! A good chunk of the plot takes place on this basically nowhere planet ruled by dragons. I feel like the dragons have some nice cities built, but probably more 'giant cyclopean' and 'in the hills and the mountains' rather than in normal racial places. They can fly and are giant lizards, why would they live in the valleys, like plebeians?

An older civilization's ruins also dots the landscape. They were apparently super magically advanced and their artifacts are still prized by the races that still live on it. However, they're terrifyingly guarded, maybe even by ghosts and other spooky ooky things. And magi-tech turrets. Some of these even carry the taint of the void, which probably draws the MoS' to Zirconia in the first place, like an awful beacon.

==Races==

[[Dragons]] - live here, rule here, eat the other races that live here. Have a king in [[Bahamut]] who is pretty sweet, if super focused on not screwing up again.

[[Elves]] - Poor god damn elves. I may be racist towards them. Live in the trees because they're good hiding spots and the dragons aren't big into deforestation.

[[Dwarves]] - Filthy little gold fuckers. They're basically super advanced golems, I feel like we could pull from the Glitch in Starbound a little.

==Things to be Resolved?==

Who were the first Zirconians and why did they have so many void objects and seal the planet? Did they actually set up the traps and everything to entice tainted into coming in and dying because they couldn't blow up the planet and would eventually be destroyed by the wandering monsters?

==Trivia!==

Zirconia was a nine year old Corvus making up a fantastical name and it haunting him until today. It was also a planet ruled by dragons then, but that was also nine year old Corvus wanting to be a dragon.